为什么有很多同学在托福写作考试中出错呢?托福写作高分有哪些障碍?托福写作怎么练?我们要了解哪些考试内容呢?一起看天道留学小编给大家介绍的内容吧。
1.托福写作答题结构不平行
例子:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
这句话的写作结构是有问题的,当将一系列的单词并列连接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.表达方式不符合语言习惯,不知所云
例子:Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题
例子:She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.
主语和动词不一致。
4.句子别扭
例子:We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
措辞过长或不清。
5.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题
例子:I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it.There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
句子的基本结构有问题,缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。
6.语气与文章不符
例子:I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me.I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris,London,Tokyo,and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.
语气与文章其他部分不相符,可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
7.代词指代不明
例子:If people do not speak the same language,it has a greater chance of miscommunication.I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good pr**rams there.
代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。
8.过于笼统
例子:We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.
句子或者所表达的意思过于笼统,不能提供多少信息。
9.托福写作答题使用动词的时态错误
例子:Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.
动词时态不正确,检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时或者是完成时等等。
10.介词多余
例子:I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday.We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch.When I first came to the US,I did not have a lot of friends in here.In class,my classmate never mentioned about her husband.
在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词,因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
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